Tuesday, February 05, 2008

Barbary Lions 2

That first draft about lions has disappeared now; I've been thinking about how to proceed, but have rather stalled over an idea to base the whole poem on an image of the lion's eye and what it can or can't see/contain. All I have is the line,

That dark universe is rheumed with galaxies,

which pleases me greatly, but will hardly do by itself.



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